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Re: Test
I liked the first stanza, the TEST really opened up the poem pretty well. And the last line was wonderful, fabulous imagery and ending to the poem. This was so ...
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Re: Martyr of Banality (about wanting to implode...)
Lol, no.
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Re: Smashing Modems
You can say that again. :)
Oct 29, 2005 -
Re: Test
Watch it...you're insulting the admin... Joking. ;)
Oct 29, 2005 -
Re: Dawn of creation
Much better. ;)
Oct 29, 2005 -
Re: Martyr of Banality (about wanting to implode...)
Errr, sorry. It's a good comment. This was greatly written, and I really liked the last line, it wrapped up the poem pretty well. Well done, good work.
Oct 29, 2005 -
Re: I always thought that ...(this game would be nice)
Cool game! IATT rat's bite can kill you... (True, till I was 7)
Oct 29, 2005 -
Re: Test
Quite funny, though. Maybe Nate posted this to see what we, as members, would do? Experiment?
Oct 29, 2005 -
Re: Smashing Modems
It's okay, I understand how you feel, somedays I'm grumpy and snap at absolutley nothing. ;)
Oct 29, 2005 -
Re: Norwegian Drive-By *comment please*
Very good imagery. I could see everything in my mind, this was wonderful. I really liked the last line it closed it up so well. Well done. -*Twinkles
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Re: I have issues that I need to solve alone...
I like the way you chose your words, this poem is very good. I really liked it, and great work. My favorite stanza: forgetting that X's ever existed forgetting to ...
Oct 29, 2005 -
Re: Dawn of creation
Yes, I didn't like the "The" in the beginning, it kinda gets on your nerves. Very nice, I really liked it. Wonderful work. -*Twinkles
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Re: Dangerous words
Great work! I really liked this. I can't see anything wrong with it.
Oct 29, 2005 -
Re: Martyr of Banality (about wanting to implode...)
Full of feeling and you make the reader feel sorry for you. I'm sorry if this poem is true...
Oct 29, 2005 -
Re: Test
Em, Poppi, I think he was trying to test something out. I don't think you have to reply to it.
Oct 29, 2005